[Do] Editing Begins (Open Thread)

Got Ryan Macklin's high-level edits for Chapter 1 of Do: Pilgrims of the Flying Temple.

Thus begins the process of shaping the slippery text into something firm. Once I come back with a revised draft, plus the new Actual Play chapter, Ryan'll do the deep edits.

We still see the end of 2010 as our goal for the final text.

Got any questions about Do and how it's developing?
Daniel Solis
Art Director by Day. Game Designer by Night.